A5 EYV Tutor Feedback.
Assignment 5: Feedback, Refinements, and New Perspectives I was thrilled to receive my feedback from Simon, my tutor, yesterday. This course has truly been a journey, and Simon’s comments were a powerful reminder of the progress I’ve made. His feedback was both positive and constructive, offering insights into how I can improve my work while […]
A4 EYV – Tutor feedback
Reflection on Tutor Feedback for Assignment 4 I’m very pleased with the tutor’s comments on Assignment 4. I was quite apprehensive about submitting it, as I wasn’t fully confident in the concept. This experience has taught me that I need to trust my instincts more, especially as my tutor pointed out that I am beginning […]
A3 EYV Rework tutor comments.
Simon, my tutor, has just let me have his comments on my Assignment 3 re-work. “Many thanks for sending through the rework of Assign 3. Your substitution of images improves the set in that it gives a more of a fleeting moment associated with the decisive moment. I think that you need to expand more […]
A3 EYV – Tutor feedback
While my tutor’s feedback on Assignment 3 was encouraging, the overarching comment was that, as an essay on the decisive moment, the work felt patchy. The images were technically sound and hung together well as a set, but some weaker images brought the overall impact down—particularly image six, which, as my tutor pointed out, was […]
A2 EYV Tutor Feedback
When I submitted my assignment 2, I was quite proud of my work as it was quite a departure from what I have ever shot over the many years I have been a photographer. I deliberately kept my assignment notes to a minimal length after my notes for the “square mile” were a bit too […]
A1 EYV Tutor Feedback
The feedback I received from Simon, my tutor, was that while I had some good individual images, they didn’t work cohesively as a set. Instead, they were more of an eclectic collection of whatever caught my eye that day. I think this feedback is spot on—my images lack focus and cohesion. It has been suggested […]