A5 EYV Rework

Assignment 5: Refining the Star Ferry Project Following the feedback from Simon, my tutor, I’ve made several changes to Assignment 5. I understood his comments regarding some of the images, and I’ve swapped a couple of the files to give a slightly different impression to the viewer. I decided to keep the original Image 5 […]

A4 EYV Rework

Revised Reflections on Assignment 4: Reprocessing and Re-edit Following my tutor’s feedback on Assignment 4, I revisited the images to address what I can only describe as lazy post-production work. My intention was to capture the mixed artificial lighting so prevalent in Hong Kong, highlighting how different light sources interact with the cityscape. Originally, I […]

A3 EYV Rework tutor comments.

Simon, my tutor, has just let me have his comments on my Assignment 3 re-work. “Many thanks for sending through the rework of Assign 3. Your substitution of images improves the set in that it gives a more of a fleeting moment associated with the decisive moment. I think that you need to expand more […]

A2 EYV – Rework

Assignment 2 – The Humanity of Litter Following feedback from my tutor on Assignment 2, I’ve re-edited, re-shot the images, and re-written the assignment notes, as I felt the latter was one of the weaker aspects of the original submission. Overall, I was pleased with the images, particularly since this project took me significantly outside […]

A1 EYV – Rework.

Following my tutor Simon’s advice, I returned to my contact sheets and tightened the edit of my assignment. The aim was to: Focus on a single element within a square mile. Highlight the reasons why these photos are important to me. Originally, I intended to convey what Hong Kong means to me, but given its […]