A3 EYV Further Reflection

Reflection on Assignment 3: The Struggles with Theme and Research Looking back at Assignment 3, the biggest challenge was establishing a cohesive theme for the set of images. Street photography, even at its best, is often unpredictable. You hit the streets with the hope of capturing a compelling image or two, but more often than […]
A3 EYV Rework tutor comments.

Simon, my tutor, has just let me have his comments on my Assignment 3 re-work. “Many thanks for sending through the rework of Assign 3. Your substitution of images improves the set in that it gives a more of a fleeting moment associated with the decisive moment. I think that you need to expand more […]
A3 EYV Rework

Here is a rework and rewritten assignment notes for Assignment 3. Mobile Phones in Hong Kong Having lived in Hong Kong for nearly seven years, I’ve witnessed firsthand how integral smartphones have become to everyday life. Street style photography, which reignited my passion for photography, has allowed me to capture this unique aspect of Hong […]
A3 EYV – Rework Semi Finalist

After further edit I’m down to 19 images.
A3 EYV Rework – Contact Sheets

After a brief edit and the addition of fresh images here are annotated contact sheets. Oh no I need to re-edit down from 38 Images again. Aggghhhhh….
A3 EYV – Tutor feedback

While my tutor’s feedback on Assignment 3 was encouraging, the overarching comment was that, as an essay on the decisive moment, the work felt patchy. The images were technically sound and hung together well as a set, but some weaker images brought the overall impact down—particularly image six, which, as my tutor pointed out, was […]